Sylvia
If you look through the dipping boughs
of the elm trees
you can see the glittering patches
of light
that is her genius
hidden beneath shadow layers of
cotton and year
are the shards that splinter
like little foot bones
and tear at rational thought
to brave the new world
would be a wonderous thing
it's all just a beautiful
dream
two by two they fall
the haunting obituary of silence
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CL
Wow this was deeply beautiful!
I really enjoyed it... something to just read while finishing my work... Now I can finish it.
Great Job!
wow. thats a very good poem. I like it a lot. The last 2 lines are the best
thank you Tazy
It was awsome i loved it keep writing ill keep reading.
thank you, I wrote it after watching the movie Sylvia.
CL
Very simple, I really like it.
Well done.